SCREENPLAY ANALYSIS
Troubleshooting your Script
Is the story you see you in your head the same
one your audience is finding on your page? Are the
most important moments of your story present in
your screenplay? What is the real truth of what your
characters are living, and how is that being
written? How far do your heroes travel? Can you face
the real ending to your movie?
Discover what
seriously needs work and attention on your best and
most important script, the one you're working on. I
provide written notes cutting right to what matters
most, followed by a talk in the office or via phone.
An honest assessment of your current draft will
right-size your perception of your screenplay,
preparing you for a true revision.
RATES
Feedback
$200 for 1-2 pages of written notes and 20-minute
consultation
*GUARANTEED 72 Hour Turnaround*
Coverage
$359 for 4-7 pages of written notes and 1-hour
consultation
*GUARANTEED 72 Hour Turnaround*
*NOTE: If notes are not received in 72 hours, you will receive a full refund.*
To order your notes now, go to www.screenplaynotes.com
BRAINSTORM: One-on-One Story Development Conference
Do you have an idea for a movie, but feel unsure
what's next? Maybe you have a treatment or outline,
or just a logline, but can't move forward.
I
can help clarify your intuition.
Acting as a guide and coach, I
will properly focus you on a pure development of your
story, leading you right into and through the
drafting of your screenplay. We will breakdown your
movie vision,
articulate the strongest narrative choices and
develop various
directions your story impulses can take to manifest
into a strong, fresh screenplay.All consultations are done in my office in Hollywood
or over the phone.
My standard fee for this service
is $175 an hour,
but for a short time, new clients may receive
their first hour for $125. Please email me at [email protected] to book your consultation now!
Questions?
If your
creative needs
do not fit into the services I formally offer, let
me know what you need and want and we will work
together to move your writing forward.
Please
visit www.screenplaynotes.com for more info or feel free
to email
me at [email protected] with any questions!