DREAMER = Chau Van Truong faces his destiny…Critique from WRITER'S DIGEST - THE NAISA MAFIA - read and enjoy............Critique On a scale of 1-5, with 1 meaning "poor" and 5 meaning "excellent," please evaluate the following:
Plot: 5 - Intriguing, with plenty of conflict.
Grammar: 4 - No major problems.
Character development: 4 - Dynamic, compelling characters.
Cover design: 4 - Eye-catching and professional.
Judge's commentary The descriptions of the action and the depictions of the characters were very realistic - it was like watching a movie in my head. A good ending, and lots of interesting settings. Tight structure, decent description, and the plot moves along nicely. This is a good book, with plenty of conflict, and an interesting hook. One of the better self-published efforts I've read.Author/filmmaker - Chau Van Truong asks visitors to check out 'THE NAISA MAFIA: Chronicle OF The Godfather'..... Call 1-800-431-1579 to get your copy deliver to your home/bookstore... Visit http://www.NAISAMAFIA.COM if you want to read the scripts... ---- Watch this clip - NAISA, SECRETS KEPT'S PITCH, RELENTLESS PURSUIT, THE EXCHANGE @ google video:::: join me at http://www.myspace.com/chauvantruongHelp me make 'THE NAISA MAFIA' a household name.Help me make ‘THE NAISA MAFIA’ a household name.WATCH ALL VIDEO ON GOOGLE VIDEO...NAISA
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A complicated passionate mess that was made to match my own. Someone with a you and me against the world attitude. Loves life’s unpredictable crazy adventures just as much as I do. Who can effortlessly tear my walls down and keep them down. Never letting me go, regardless if I pretended like I wanted to leave. They would have to give me a sure sense of security but at the same time keep my interest. Someone to show me love that is bliss not wounding. A person I would die without.
until then...
I DON'T WANT A RELATIONSHIP. I will date here and there.I think I will be single for a LONG time. Id Love it if you proved me wrong.
As Far As Friendships Go...
I will befriend people of any sort but I mostly enjoy being around people with extreme personalities people who will leave a lasting impression in my ever changing world. I want to meet someone strong minded who will stick around even when the going gets ruff.
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The more I get to know people the more I despise of the human race. Don’t tell me you’re a good person, then prove just the opposite with your actions. You will only be viewed as another disappointment and I will cut you out of my life.
SUMMARY OF ‘THE NAISA MAFIAHave you ever felt doomed to normalcy due to the order of your birth? Have you ever been willing to do anything to win the favor of a family who holds it hostage depending on the choices you made? THE NAISA MAFIA: Chronicle Of The Godfather is a saga of the rise and fall of a man named Phi-Long Tran - Godfather of the NAISA Mafia, who started and operated the most powerful international crime syndicate. The brutality and the ruthlessness of his reign are chronicled through his footsteps as he tries to remain on top. As a boy, Phi-Long seeks his father’s approval and his mother’s understanding. In his quest, he finds none. No matter how hard he tries, Phi-Long is denied. In order to find the love he desired, he starts a surrogate family fueled by the dark primitive instincts of men, which is to rule with extreme prejudice. To become a man of honor and respect, he must adhere to the fear of his trade that is to kill all who go against him. An enigma to the people Phi-Long commandeered, and to the victims he left behind, the readers will see the struggles and humanities of the Godfather through his own eyes. The revelation of the monster he becomes to the salvation of a man who will redeem himself.
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Critique from WRITER'S DIGEST - THE NAISA MAFIA - read and enjoy............Critique On a scale of 1-5, with 1 meaning "poor" and 5 meaning "excellent," please evaluate the following:
Plot: 5 - Intriguing, with plenty of conflict.
Grammar: 4 - No major problems.
Character development: 4 - Dynamic, compelling characters.
Cover design: 4 - Eye-catching and professional.
Judge's commentary The descriptions of the action and the depictions of the characters were very realistic - it was like watching a movie in my head. A good ending, and lots of interesting settings. Tight structure, decent description, and the plot moves along nicely. This is a good book, with plenty of conflict, and an interesting hook. One of the better self-published efforts I've read.Author/filmmaker - Chau Van Truong asks visitors to check out 'THE NAISA MAFIA: Chronicle OF The Godfather'..... Call 1-800-431-1579 to get your copy deliver to your home/bookstore... Visit http://www.naisa-usa.com if you want to read the scripts... ---- Watch this clip - NAISA, SECRETS KEPT'S PITCH, RELENTLESS PURSUIT, THE EXCHANGE @ google video:::: join me at http://www.myspace.com/chauvantruongHelp me make 'THE NAISA MAFIA' a household name.
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