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~ Dr. Victorine

i should teach a class... i'm just that good!

About Me


Terror With A Pen
Relentlessly whipping words into a
Feverish frenzy this weapon of
Wily written expression craftily carves
Caricatures of ignominious infidels
Posing as poets,
Spoken word show-offs,
And abhorrent authors.
This contrivance of conveyance
Swiftly slices straight through
Ominous offenders who
Attack this art with arrogance,
Imitating intelligence.
Penning prefunctionary passages
That show no more literary legitimacy
Than those ostentatious orations
Bush bumbles to address
And confuse the nation.
A merciless marker,
Assassinating atrocious alliteration
Created by contemptible cads,
Armed with the assumption that
The core of this craft
Is about
Gratuitous grandstanding;
Articulating arousal for the sake of
Securing some ass;
Evoking emotionless erotica,
Or shallow stabs at scripting
Urban untruths for the sake of
Cash.
This Berol barrel bird dogs these
bluffers
And dispenses discharges designed,
To pitilessly pick them off
One at a time.
Did I lose you?
Did the hyperbolic idioms
Serve to confuse you?
If that be the case...drop that
Writing utensil down and
Sloooooooooowly
Walk
Awaaaaaaaaaaaaaay.
You're undeserving of such
An instrument of influence.
Unworthy of the divinely
Dictated duty
True writers and poets
Wear like nooses,
Or draped over their shoulders
Like yokes.
Can't create above the common?
Can't comprehend beyond the
Colloquial?
Then cease disrespecting the pros
Of poetry and prose
Who bleed words and breathe
Verbs.
Creating not to be celebrated
Or to receive complimentary
Comments in constricted
Cloisters.
But are eloquent extensions
Of their conscious compositions.
The design of this rhyme was not
To astound with the mastery of my
Voluminous vocabulary.
Or to brandish the dexterity i
possess,
In my ability to use a dictionary
And thesaurus.
It's just...
Well...
I am ceasing to be impressed
With these
Self proclaimed poets who
Limit themselves.
These self affirmed authors
Whose cookie-cutter-like books
Sit on major store shelves,
Boasting self importance because
Of the numbers they sell,
But never pushing the envelope
Or raising the bar.
Content with producing sub par
Yet expecting me to "feel them",
When I'd much rather
STEP UP MY GAME
And use this .5 lead to kill them
I don't think you understand...
When it comes to the relationship
I have with my pen
And some paper
I don't taper the message to
Bring myself glory.
More true to the fact,
I don't write these poems,
These poems
WRITE ME...
And that fact keeps
Me in a humble key.
I just play the aqueduct
These liquid lyrics
Flow through.
Not saying I'm the
Pinnacle
With the hottest shit
Waiting in queue.
But what I am saying is...
When the mind births
Symbolic sibilants,
And the ink spills
Mesmeric metonymy,
And the quill draws
Diabolic duologues
It unleashes the
Egg headed epistolarian
In me.
So please...
If you're gonna script
Then realize this,
You're in direct sights of
A treatise terrorist.
Who's quick to cut
Without regret,
And whose pen takes
No prisoners.
© 5/22/07 IDADI ~ TOTALITY

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My Interests

written expression, poetry, spirituality, life and love.

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Who I Represent:

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Music:

jazz, pop, classic R&B (70's 80's and 90's), conscious rap, meditation, classical, neosoul, soca, dancehall, reggae... uh... anything that doesn't contain a whole lotta the words bitch, bling, ni**a, or any references to gun play/robbery/thuggery/ganstas... (damn, that eliminates a whole lotta tunes don't it?), any: brian MACKnight, carl thomas, janet, madonna, nickelback, puddle of mud, mary, jill, india, erykah, ursher, seal, sting, aaliyah, shawn carter, chris bridges, and marshall mathers (despite the above disclaimer)... and the list could go on but... who has the time?

Movies:

300, across the universe, vanilla sky, butterfly effect, what dreams may come, a beautiful mind, the god father trilogy, good fellas, casino, like water for chocolate, bram stoker's dracula, the mask of zorro, don juan d' marco, basketball diaries, phantom of the opera, unfaithful, under the tuscan sun, the roman spring of mrs. stone, hav plenty, love and basketball, the bridges of madison county, love jones, dead presidents, secret window, the lord of the rings trilogy, ray, the fisher king, rent, final cut, one hour photo, a clockwork orange, frida, what the bleep do we know, the fountain, jack, maria full of grace, spanglish, patch adams, the last temptation of christ, the five people you meet in heaven, something the lord made, legends of the fall, les miserables, zeitgiest, chocolat, dream catcher, the colour purple, while i was gone and probably a whole lot more nobody really knows (or cares) about...

Television:

television? what's that? isn't this thing television? it has a screen and colours... who's to say it's not?

Books:

random acts of badness, the artist's way, the great and secret show, the kin of ata are waiting for you, my life, the secrets of the heart, the tao of pooh, the te of piglet good omens, next, the mastery of love, the four agreements, sex magick, lamb, the bonesetter's daughter, the alchemist, while i was gone, the power of intention, the power of a praying wife, who moved my cheese, discover the power within you, queen of the planet earth, sextrology, ruling planets, angela's ashes, tuesdays with morrie, the five people you meet in heaven, for one more day, the darkest child, the colour purple, any by toni morrison, in search of a woman's passionate soul, the seductive art of astrology, the spontaneous fulfillment of desire, the writer's life, any by dr. maya angelou, the prophet, your erroneous zones, MISADVENTURES OF MOMS AND DISASTERS OF DADS (cause i'm in it), the feminine face of god, a woman's journey to god, little alters everywhere, the divine secrets of the ya ya sisterhood, the chakras, the goddess in the gospels, the woman with the alabaster jar, as a women thinketh, healing love through the tao, to ride a silver broomstick, the circle within, the body sacred, the book of goddesses, solitary wicca, living wicca, any by stephen king, the davinci code, any by neil gaiman, the dictionary, any thesaurus, the yellow pages, and all SIX of mine...

Heroes:

Kali Ma, Lord Shiva, The E-Quad, John Lennon, Jonathan Larson, and...

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My Blog

New Nappy Blog

in case you missed the bulletin that myspace kept fudging up...www.idadi.wordpress.comdoing the natural thing... thought i should share... click the link and you share too, please. *wink*blessed be......
Posted by ~ Dr. Victorine on Fri, 09 May 2008 08:24:00 PST

Hey Anonymous Message Sender Person

Since you used someone else's account to clandestinely send me that oh so "damning" message, and then made the account private, I can't readily respond via normal means. However, since I'm sure you we...
Posted by ~ Dr. Victorine on Wed, 16 Apr 2008 04:01:00 PST

secret squirrel

what lies behind the secrecy the man immersed in mystery embraced by shadows love's light cannot dispel and even my open heart cannot reach what lies beyond the veil making man of myth and mortal of ...
Posted by ~ Dr. Victorine on Mon, 14 Apr 2008 10:58:00 PST

a god scripted

seeing him in the word pictures of his creations paused eternally in thought it is to see a horizon painted by the fingertips of the sun rise vision becomes virginal penetrated by the birth of beautif...
Posted by ~ Dr. Victorine on Mon, 14 Apr 2008 10:51:00 PST

back to life

the shrill alarm echoes in early morning darkness bringing awareness that real life has begun to begin bringing me back to monday again with courses and the coarseness being without him brings it's no...
Posted by ~ Dr. Victorine on Mon, 14 Apr 2008 10:53:00 PST

Morbid-versary

i vowto always rememberi promiseto never forgettwin phallusesreduced to dustin a manner of minutesmultiple lives sacrificedby powers swornto protect and servea foreign threatparaded as patsyto cover u...
Posted by ~ Dr. Victorine on Fri, 14 Sep 2007 12:28:00 PST

Judge Not

sunkenand submergedbeneath the guise ofprotective confidanteimages ofunfufilled wishesscurgedshines througha woman scornedseeing not beyondbiased conceptsthat shine throughvision sharp onall aspectssa...
Posted by ~ Dr. Victorine on Wed, 12 Sep 2007 05:34:00 PST

Unforgiven

thedoor lies opencracked slightlybut large enough for you topeak inget a taste of myshadowa glimpse of mysinsee my unprettymomentsflickers ofselfish willand opportunisticarrogancewhen i would ratherki...
Posted by ~ Dr. Victorine on Wed, 12 Sep 2007 05:32:00 PST

Double Talk

iiloveloveyouyouhis voice tells methese wordsbut then his actions sayshe loves her tooit echoes through my mindmaking me wonderwhati should doi listen to justificationand see disregardwhich should i c...
Posted by ~ Dr. Victorine on Wed, 12 Sep 2007 05:31:00 PST

The Goddess's Goodbye

i did this to myself i made you love me playing the game of distressed damsel and coy courtesan flawlessly knew how to be in the right places at all the right times smile shyly at just the right momen...
Posted by ~ Dr. Victorine on Mon, 25 Jun 2007 02:26:00 PST