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About Me

++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ ++ Hi my name is Steven
Photo Sharing - Upload Video - Video Sharing - Share Photos ------------------------------------------------------------ ----------------------------------------------------------Ha ppiness ends where this story begins. A lonely face’s left to age alone! In this Ever- widening circle, the gravity is Pulling me down. The years pass by as if they were decades. Your changing into someone I don’t know! While I just stay the same.I can see the space between the lenses. Where our perception fragments. It’s a dead space, with never-ending possibilities. But only those who can still believe can enter. I wish you still believed! I know you can.As children we entered, as lovers we became. The flowers we raised, a tough garden to till. But our efforts prevailed. Until you left me to die alone! Alone you left our circle. My heart can beat without you! But it pumps to a beat unknown.While you smile and enjoy your day. I just want to touch you, just to feel I’m here! To go and touch another is something that I fear. You took my pride and trampled under foot. You took my heart and trapped it in the dark! All because I loved you, I’m left to love alone. You would of done this regardless. Heaven help our happy home.This Freedom we’ve gained has its price. So this is what they say. I think I’m paying with my heart! I hope I don’t over pay! Steven 2006-------------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------------------------ --
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Photo Sharing - Upload Video - Video Sharing - Share Photos ------------------------------------------------------------ ----------------------------------------------------------TH E DANCE OF THE LIPS AND HEARTLooking through windows finding new Friends. Into this tranquility my time does descend. I free my mind and Focus my thought’s on you! Into your soul my heart does climb. With feelings of Love and Wonderment! Flowing hair is surrounding your face. Radiating a vibe that pulls me inside, To a place that’s soft and gentile. The Music flows we feel the sound, the nights just young were two in the crowd. We’re not alone but I’m still lost in you! I’m squeezing your fingers while feeling amused. We’re one in our hearts and I’m looking at you. Your feeling the heat, we’re feeling the groove. This dance of two Lovers is setting the mood! We walk in the Dark with bare feet in the sand. I’m feeling peaceful while holding your hand. This feeling is spiritual This Feeling is grand. My heart is expanding I’m holding your waist I look in your eyes I’m exploring your face. My lips reach for yours and so they embrace. This dance of the lips this dance of the heart. So soft are your kisses, I’m feeling your art We embrace in the moon, stars and sky overhead. Two souls of a feather, two souls in the wind! Two souls of the lovers are happy again!Steven 2006
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Photo Sharing - Upload Video - Video Sharing - Share Photos ------------------------------------------------------------ ----------------------------------------------------------Em otional FlowI want to touch you, your silken skin I can’t resist. The smell of your hair makes me Want to come closer. The time is right, and you are now! Nothings better than now! Your emotional flow seduces me. The moon rises as our insecurities fall Into my arms you retreat. I feel your body, and then I relax. The heat within me rises. I cast away all my doubt. You are what I’ve needed. I look at you, you look at me. We know we want this, feel the heat. To lift the weight from the soul, To cast away our anger. To feel our life return. Instead of just remembering. Steven 2006-------------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------------------------ --
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Hearts of hurt. A new love. The thought is like my soul shattering! Teeth tight, hoplessness dominates. All positives recoil. Helplessness dominates the mind. Another hand, anothers breath. Your hands rubbing the hairs of his chest. All comfort lost, can't see the light. The curves of your body. Your supple breast. So sweet,the smell of your skin. Sin takes me over. You take me. I feel your flower. So powerful, it's what drives me. I hold your hair, you look at me helpless. I'm a man. Then a boy. Your toy! I rub your ass, it controls me. The taste of your love, insanity. Animal behaviour makes me sweat. You scream in extacy. I release my sin. You lose your cool. Wildly kissing me. Kissing me where lust makes love spin out of control. All is spent. We collapes, in each other arms. But I'm not me! Your you. In his arms. My arms are severed. Blood pours from my heart. The pain of losing you. I'm losing my mind. I'm torn apart.Torn Apart. Steven. 2003

Television:

I FEAR THE NIGHT!I Fear The Night. I lie awake at night. Im afraid to shut my eyes. For the fear of never getting to tell you, farewell my love,and goodbye. If I had another chance, I would kiss you on the lips, and love you for all time. I cant exsplain this pain of shame, I feel it in the wake of day. I cant convince you how I feel. The overwelming tide. The undertoe that grips my heart, the pain is deep inside. Ive come so far my grip is tight. I just long to love you and never fight. I understand your point of veiw, The doubt that fills your heart. But one thing thats clear and true, Ive learnd so much this time. Like how to love, how not to hurt! Whats important and what comes first! To close my mouth,it's very hard. The skills to work on, my lack of charm. But everytime I see your face. Or hear your voice. My heart does race. I beg of you my darling, Look deep into my eyes To please beleave that my devotion isnt all a waist. I will do as you shall ask me. I will behold your stunning grace. Your eyes so brown, your lips so soft. your voice so soothing and never cross. Your all a man could ask for. your all I would embrace. Your all the woman I've ever wanted, your needs arn't hard to face. I was the fool, it was never you. I ignored my heart in haiste. But I beg for you to listen, please open up your heart. I've learned the hardest lesson, to listen to the heart. To treat you like a queen. To listen till your through. Your tears mean to be patient. They mean you love me too! I will not blame you if we part. After all, I broke your heart. I've come to ask forgivness. I've come to say your smart. I've relised its not for me to judge. You did fullfill your part. It's me that shatered all our dreams. By foolish demands, and being mean. But I love you debbie, I beg for a new start. With that, I will be waiting. Untill in death we do so part.Steven 2006

Books:

ETERNAL HEARTI stare up and wonder why,you built this wall so very high. To see it standing looking down, makes me start to cry. Its way to big for me to climb, you built it oh so tall, it is so high. I hear the laughter from within, the thing's you love, you keep their in. It's cold out here, and very dark. And scary thing's their teeth are sharp. I'm unprotected without my clothes, standing naked I feel alone. I shiver and cry,as I hear the laughter from inside. I cry out too you, but hear no answer. This darkened heart that I do keep, feels no love and never beats. Everyday and every week. cold months have passed and the years they creep. And still I can here all your laughter. No time for me. No love to spare. I know you don't want me, I'ts in your glare. And in this world Im fading. I'm crying hard, its been so long. My bodys failing, were it once was strong. This impotence is a nightmarish fog.The laughing the pointing thou not by you. My mind is filled with thought's of doom. Can't help to think he pleasures you. Is it better than me, does he make you cum. And are your desires filled, when he get's it done. For so many years I tried so hard, but your bossom never stiffend. So here I am, out in the cold. No one wants me. my eyes feel old. My hair in thin, Im growing tits, I still can't last, I got the hint. My mind is dark, I lost the spark, I have no lover to sooth my heart. And the wall grows ever bigger. You say be patient, you say be strong, to a mind thats feels it cant go on. I'll try to do just as you say, as the years they start to chip away, and the hole gets even deeper. Lucky for you you've got a new start. You found a lover to mend your heart. You like them old , they stay away. You spoke of another just the other day. Is he married too, does he love his wife. Would he die for you to save your life. You know I would, you know Im true. But you have more important things to do. Will he hold your hand when the desease sets in. Will he raise your son,and never trade you in. Would he of worked so hard for all those years, just to lose you in the end. Will he marry you against all odds, or slither in when lifes not so hard. For this I stop to wonder. Will this nightmare ever end, or will this darkness forever desend. I gave to you my Eternal Heart. and in that moment you tried to part. Up on the alter I guess you lied. Just to think if my mother answerd. It may have been nerves or just the night.as we stood there in the chapel light. Eye to eye we said I do, I meant those words, I thought you did too. I remember driving home that night, and the bottles they tossed gave us a frieght. But I just kept driving no time to fight. I was in love and with my wife. But you see I still am, and it grows, as I write these letters or sing you songs. But dont you worry I'll be alright. I'll be out here in the cold dark night!Steven 2006

Heroes:

There is a SicknessThere is a sickness I feel it don’t you! People scared! People in pain! Lies at every corner. But this aint nothing new! No one really gives a shit. I know I cant save us! But its how I sleep. Without care my mind wonders. Wonders without care! I care because it’s me! Even without you, I still care. I feel defeated most the time. But I push regardless. Push to the brink of love. Love is the way! The way is LOVE! All you need is LOVE. An insect told me that long ago! The Presidents not to blame. But he is the head. Like David and Goliath. You must have a target. The Red dot just isn’t the one. Come on rainbow people. Lets not fight Brother to Brother. Sister to Sister! Good over Evil Without Evil there’s no good. It’s the evil in man that condemns us! But I feel it under my skin. Its time to give up the fight. But only to start a new one. Disguised as a heart. I’m sick of hunger. I’m sick of pain. I’m sick of you! But you see I need you. Need you to hold my hand. My hands hold the truth. The truth holds my hands! Like sweet and sour pork. I eat it up. It’s that sourness That brings forth the sweetness. I will never back down. I cant; I’m already on the ground. Only direction for me is inward. Inward to my Heart! Steven 2006

My Blog

Torn Apart

Torn ApartHearts of hurt,a new love.The thought is like my soul shattering!All positives recoil,helplessness takes me. Another hand,anothers breath. Your hands rubbing the hairs of his chest.All comfo...
Posted by Poeticaly Correct on Fri, 19 Jan 2007 07:27:00 PST

Love Flight

You are my desireEverything I hold is because of you! I lay awake every night Searching the depth of my soul.Every time it shows me light, And in the witching hour All I see is you! In the land of the...
Posted by Poeticaly Correct on Sat, 02 Dec 2006 11:59:00 PST

You!

You!You are my heart. All of my Soul feels the longing in your tears.If I could change the winds of time I would.Turn back the sadness that you feel.I hope my love will wash away your burden.Like the ...
Posted by Poeticaly Correct on Sun, 26 Nov 2006 02:31:00 PST

I have this decision to make.

I have this decision to make.But my heart won't take!To break these bonds that bind me!I can love two but when the day is throughOnly one is sleeping beside me!Can I break up my heart and tear it in t...
Posted by Poeticaly Correct on Wed, 22 Nov 2006 02:25:00 PST

This is just hallarious (Our Taxs payers dollars at work)

This is just hallarious (Our Taxs payers dollars at work) Body: If this isnt the proof of our pathetic goverment in action nothing is! Let me know if you get whats funny here!Then please re-post!!...
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Approval of Bush Policy on Iraq Declines

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Brazil Model Who Battled Anorexia Dies

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Peter Gabriel Receives Peace Award

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U.S. Approval of Bush Iraq Policy Drops

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Posted by Poeticaly Correct on Mon, 13 Nov 2006 11:14:00 PST