Cloud - Writer

Some of my writing:

Without saying a word he gathers your hair in his hands and smells its liftingfragrance. Pulsating Breath caresses your neck in anticipation of the secretpromise. His Breath continues to beat gently against your face until at last yourtrembling waiting lips are reached. He pulls your moist breath into him holding backthe desire of taking your lips fully. His eyes slowly open holding you captive,before they continue their journey to your parted lips. His hands tighten on yourarms. He turns sensing that your longing is not yet great enough.
You glance hesitantly at your new secret friend. A night creature, he feels yourglance but continues on his way. Quietly a wonderful feeling flows over you. Soundsand movement seem to slow down. A warm moistness moves softly over your skin like agentle breeze. Yielding to the comfort of this sensation, you wait and watch himlike a hungry huntress. Is there a place for you where he settles down? A faintweakness passes through you as you realize if you don't act quickly this opportunitymay not be yours. Not sure if he notices, you finally reach him. Realizing that hedesires your pounding silence, you smoothly lower yourself next to him. A pleasantsense of pressure, and satisfaction moves inside you. You wait and watch, aware thatthe other huntresses watch too, attentive to his every movement