Jimmys Rhyme to shine |
Ight well my family has ome pretty good writers in it me and my sis actually but the kids are pretty talented.......i came across this yesterday on ym cousins page and was shocked kid blew my mind wit... Posted by on Fri, 09 Feb 2007 06:25:00 GMT |
20's His Haunting |
day one
18 years, it had all been a blur
he wrote through it all cuz he cared
but if poetry was his love then theres no word to explain the way he felt for her
two to five
it was always good no need t... Posted by on Sun, 20 Aug 2006 18:25:00 GMT |
Thesis statement |
yet another unfinished piece from the king of unfinished things take it for what it is and wheres its at
you can lead the reader to the book but you cant make him turn the pages
ignoranc... Posted by on Tue, 25 Jul 2006 17:39:00 GMT |
breakout |
first verse for a song im writing called breakout
yo i dont know what im doin
stand still in life while everyone is movin
and as i write i break pencils
tryed standin in the light but it... Posted by on Tue, 25 Jul 2006 17:30:00 GMT |
Thats goin to be the title......... |
I love you or I hate you
one or the other he couldnt decide
he loved that she was his poetic inspiration
but hated how he could never make something good enough for her so he was constantly erasing an... Posted by on Tue, 25 Jul 2006 16:39:00 GMT |
IDOL chatter |
yo this is alittle different form my usaul stuff alot less serious its about my idols and people i look uo to in hip hop so enjoy
From the spark
Most things have past my SOLE
Every look around... Posted by on Tue, 28 Mar 2006 16:18:00 GMT |
Never Never Land |
Eevryoen this is a true story that i am writing its and ode to my cousin eddie adam velez who died when he was 5, i was 7, it was very hard for me to write this its heart felt nothing fancy or anythin... Posted by on Mon, 27 Mar 2006 17:00:00 GMT |
So who was i kidding???? |
I think im really not to sure about alot of things
see thats the problem with me
i usaully just see what i wnat to see
i mean who am i really kidding?
its a joke to think i could actually escape thes... Posted by on Thu, 16 Mar 2006 15:39:00 GMT |
Court is now in session..... |
so i asked why is it my choice to be part of the few with an understanding
of why conformity and redundance plague us with overwhelming strength and a sense of constant demanding
god gosh im fat!
mor... Posted by on Wed, 15 Mar 2006 16:18:00 GMT |
The dilemma |
Ight people i was in the writing mood today so im almost finished with this just ahve to get my last verse goin
This a convo between underground hip hop and commercial hip hop just some shit i had on ... Posted by on Tue, 14 Mar 2006 18:46:00 GMT |