here's a bit more... feedback welcome |
Jacob locked eyes with an object
that held not only his eyes, but every inch of his being enthralled. He
swallowed hard as his shaking hands reached out like those of a beggar
imploring for alms. T... Posted by on Mon, 06 Jul 2009 03:27:00 GMT |
One i plan on finishing for real |
He
stood in the doorway staring at the goddess that slept before him. Buried
inside the snow white pillows and comforter set against a maplewood frame, all
he could see was her face a... Posted by on Mon, 01 Jun 2009 00:21:00 GMT |
some story for ya' |
"What
could you possibly hope to accomplish in the little time you have left?"
the shade asked of the figure knelt before it. its cold frame a mere
shadow that stood in opposition to the moonlight... Posted by on Sun, 10 May 2009 01:50:00 GMT |
next bit of story |
The bow of the ship dipped and rose gracefully through the gentle swell of the ocean. Above, the moon was full, and so bright, that it created a lunar halo. This was a sign of good fortune. So brigh... Posted by on Wed, 28 Jan 2009 03:29:00 GMT |
Poseidon print inspired this... |
Listlessly, his being drifts to threads.His feet tred shallow darkness.Age withered eyes turn to a sun stained skyhe hears the mariners calling.From his mouth, his voice erupts,arcane words into subtl... Posted by on Sun, 18 Jan 2009 03:10:00 GMT |
more... |
The night air was filled with gently drifting snow and the muffled laughter of the local pubs. Viktor stood under the light of ... Posted by on Sat, 03 Jan 2009 08:10:00 GMT |
...continued |
The sun was already hanging high in the east when Viktor woke up. The light caused a searing pain behind his eyes. His side hurt from the way he had slept and he had trouble sliding on the boot of his... Posted by on Wed, 31 Dec 2008 08:09:00 GMT |
Another beginning.... |
Just another beginning to another story. no editing. Rough draft.
The rain pelted the grou... Posted by on Sat, 27 Dec 2008 06:13:00 GMT |
Number Thirteen and Fourteen(incomplete) |
13
Do you see now why i stayed?
The world has proven itself more than shades of grey.
In all its compound travesties,
its dirty hordes, its pagan queens,
there in the crowd i find your face.... Posted by on Thu, 04 Dec 2008 09:42:00 GMT |
Excerpt from a song.. |
I really like these lyrics. Thats all.
He laid emeralds in her eyes, but I'dalready tied a bracelet made of gold and a scarletthread around her wrist. Everything was wrong so wesang sentim... Posted by on Wed, 19 Nov 2008 15:35:00 GMT |