the silence *critical comments please?* |
I believe this is our last good byesay it's true, show me your still breathingthere's a dead look in your eyesplease don't gonot without methere's more to it than it seemstakin time to cause fract... Posted by on Fri, 05 Jun 2009 22:05:00 GMT |
new lyrics *critcal comments welcome* |
Baby-girl help me breathemy heart is gone, my hands are numbbut after all i still standi feel nothing but painthis cold feeling we'll be nothing but the sameyour fucking eyes bleed liesi need the trut... Posted by on Wed, 27 May 2009 18:45:00 GMT |
lyrics for a song(not finshed or refined)*critical comments welcome* |
*some changes made*i can make room for youin my heart and in my mindi can get hurt for youall my scars will heal with timei know we'll regret thisi know you'll regret thiswe're ships at sea slowly dr... Posted by on Mon, 18 May 2009 20:01:00 GMT |
poetry(its been awhile) |
back in open armsinto the palms of trepidationyour presense runs through my mindonly to slip right out of my fingersone simple act to act on anotherto act on your own and discover the triggerliving is... Posted by on Sat, 09 May 2009 21:53:00 GMT |
the moment |
Let's close our eyesand take our last breaths...i'll make the insitionsI swear ill be quickWe can't fall nowwe've come to farlets be good with our desionsthe clocks at its last tickfor once in a life ... Posted by on Tue, 21 Oct 2008 02:02:00 GMT |