PARAPHRASING (trash poetry) |
PARAPHRASING...rewording...rewrite, rewrite, and more rewrite.I need to do some actionwhile inaction is filling the voidany suggestions for me to improve?I thought I have it all...or perhaps NONEthos...
Posted by ASIAN JORGE" on Sun, 03 Dec 2006 02:25:00 PST |
WHAT DID YOU SAY (LOVE)? (trash poetry) |
WHAT DID YOU SAY (LOVE)?We crave for everythingbut they always comeand will surely gohow about getting lost...Sometime?like now?then get back on trackbut not the same trackwe have been to...just a ne...
Posted by ASIAN JORGE" on Wed, 25 Oct 2006 09:19:00 PST |
COGNITIVE (trash poetry) |
COGNITIVESometimes...I don't see thingsstraightall i CAN do is...stumble and falland end up being laughed uponby my mistakeor I pluralize it: mistakesI'm so unawareSometimes...when I get pre-occupied...
Posted by ASIAN JORGE" on Tue, 17 Oct 2006 03:55:00 PST |
DECEPTIONS (trash poetry) |
DECEPTIONSAll signshintbefore those very eyeswell...isn't everythingis truly blindwe show thingsthe other wayhintswell sometimes"IT" missesto give usto tell ustruthuntil the very last minute...it's t...
Posted by ASIAN JORGE" on Mon, 09 Oct 2006 02:50:00 PST |
17:32 (trash poetry) |
17:32Sitting with a smirkand looking afar whenI am just herewith mind over-flowing withstrayed thoughtsof the randomnest thingsI always createand the internetRING!!!!!!Pick it up"Hello" I speakthe ot...
Posted by ASIAN JORGE" on Thu, 05 Oct 2006 04:40:00 PST |
STRONG FEELINGS (blank verse) |
STRONG FEELINGS
Today while pressured I sitwonder and askmyselfalongof few things actuallyanything regardless...really
And just with the wordsthat cure all thesemalaise in a dark day turns bright...ge...
Posted by ASIAN JORGE" on Thu, 21 Sep 2006 06:26:00 PST |
DAYS (poetry) |
DAYS
Do you think I should go nowbut hey it has been a great daymind to throw at least one of your crooked smiles
...then I go
Thank you so muchfor giving life to my dreamsgood moments as we putspendi...
Posted by ASIAN JORGE" on Fri, 15 Sep 2006 06:15:00 PST |
CANDYMOUTHED PLAYER (poetry) |
CANDYMOUTHED PLAYER
Picture meif you canI didpicture youand I still doI just needto make sureyou sayall the wordsas is
Stop ityou and Iobserve honestywith one anotherto simply tellthingsand truthso no...
Posted by ASIAN JORGE" on Fri, 08 Sep 2006 04:09:00 PST |
MUMBLE DOWN? (poetry-allegorical) |
MUMBLE DOWN?
Caught in a traphardly move on
Can not start an actionhalf breathing
Slipping awayfrom such unpleasantness
While crave for something that can hardly achieve
Not yetstumble and fall
But th...
Posted by ASIAN JORGE" on Sun, 03 Sep 2006 04:32:00 PST |
WORD (blank verse) |
WORD
Hey you!come overyes... here...share this benchwith no one else but mewe'll not cuddleno public display of affectionnone of those thingsjust oneheart-to-hearttalk
Hey you!tell me what's on your m...
Posted by ASIAN JORGE" on Tue, 22 Aug 2006 06:10:00 PST |
