Feedback please. Work in progress |
NapoleonMy tiny hands grip your bruised anklesAs you drag me through sugery liesWhile you try to conquer the worldI kiss your bitter promisesAs you wave yet another victory flagProving your complex"If... Posted by on Sat, 20 Oct 2007 20:26:00 GMT |
poem inspired by my trip to new york |
The FloaterEvery morning she wakes up to a war zone.Scattered limbs and chunks of skin.Torn love letters and charred photographs.She sorts through the debris ofOther people's broken dreamsAnd unrealiz... Posted by on Sat, 23 Jun 2007 13:27:00 GMT |
feedback would be great |
A Misguided Epiphany You emerged gallantly,in an idealistic cloud,from the crevicesof my subconscious. The dreamer in mewho had been hiding,licking her woundsfrom a previou... Posted by on Mon, 23 Apr 2007 16:48:00 GMT |
I need help |
I wrote this poem while I was wandering around Pottery Barn. I got the first draft out easily, but now I'm having some problems. I think I need new eyes. Special note to my musically inclined friends ... Posted by on Sat, 11 Nov 2006 14:11:00 GMT |