Mesmer, Chapter One, rough draft |
This tale was first told in the pages of a diary belonging to a young girl named Jaclyn Rose. Little good it does us, since the diary entries were written in a magical ... Posted by Chris on Mon, 17 Mar 2008 04:00:00 PST |
The Watchers: short story rough draft |
I finished a story! Wooooh... it's actually an old one I picked up this morning and completed the last third, but whatever, it's still finished. Anyway, this is the rough draft so tell me what you thi... Posted by Chris on Thu, 28 Feb 2008 03:38:00 PST |
Mythos Revised I, II, II |
Mythos is going through a major revision, which I will be posting for the next couple of days. I'm taking out things, adding new things, fixing inconsistencies (pointed out by Travis and others), etc.... Posted by Chris on Wed, 27 Feb 2008 02:13:00 PST |
Chapter Five of Mythos |
Woah, now. Chapter 5. I'm proud of this one. It's got everything: action, suspense... and even a little bit of mushy stuff that makes you feel all warm inside. Enoy.
By the way... I'm not even control... Posted by Chris on Sat, 16 Feb 2008 01:25:00 PST |
Mythos Chapter Four |
Chapter Four:
The Kitchen Spirit
(She speaks lies, child. Do not heed her words. If you do all will be lost.)
"What...?"
Dua Donna awoke to a voice that was unfamiliar. A woman's voice. Soft an... Posted by Chris on Sat, 09 Feb 2008 11:55:00 PST |
Chapter Three of Mythos |
Chapter Three: Bear
Dua awoke in a small cramped bed made of coarse wool and straw that itched at her skin, and around her was a tangled mess of strange machinery that groaned and creaked. The r... Posted by Chris on Mon, 21 Jan 2008 07:57:00 PST |
Chapter Two of Mythos |
Chapter Two: Echidna
In the forest there was a longhouse that sat on the Ina River, a great big house made of fire-hardened saplings and tree bark, as long as a sea serpent and as wide as two or... Posted by Chris on Mon, 21 Jan 2008 07:51:00 PST |
Chapter One of Mythos |
This is the rough draft of the first chapter of Mythos, a new novel for children that I'm writing. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Enjoy!
Chapter One:
The Shadow Do... Posted by Chris on Tue, 25 Dec 2007 01:43:00 PST |